Needs improvement
Obviously very linear and unchallenging. Has grammar errors which really make it seem bad. Your crosshair shouldn't be on the cursor when you're in the menu.
If you made this code yourself then I congradulate you for learning how to script, if you got this code from someone else then I would recommend to learn how to do it yourself and improve upon it.
Definately funny
Definately.
Some issues
The bodies play the the death animation each time they are hit, even when they are dead. This can lead to some confusion as to what you are hitting.
It also seems that enemies become transparent when running behind the dead bodies of other enemies, which can be annoying.
Finally, the enemies go into the hole while standing a foot away, which is both confusing and troublesome.
Pretty interesting.
Well first of all, it worked, which is obviously an essential thing for a game. The voices were pretty.. funny.. I could tell you made your voice very deep for charlie.
The game is pretty interesting seeing as how it breaks the fourth wall (charlie is voiced and talks to you), usually shooters allow the player to take control of the protagonist (meaning he isn't voiced).
Over all pretty damn good.
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Joined on 7/30/08
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